(Replying to my own post because editing is a bit screwed up.) To the downvoters: I'm not saying this to denigrate this guy. He's TRYING. Respect to that. If he wants to be Canada's answer to Tim Pool, fantastic. BUT. I want him to improve. If someone like me - who's receptive to what he has to say - is turned off by his sounding ignorant? That's not good. He needs an editor or something. Hell, I'd do it pro bono.