I am the Peoples Party rep from Portage-Lisgar. (Feedback)
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Put some of your campaign promises in there.
Highlight what the CPC is not doing for conservatives.
Candice Bergen has been a good rep in the past but she's Erin's right-hand woman now and has been silent for a long time.
Front and back sides of a flyer I'm planning to distribute to every household. Please provide feedback. Thank you.
Looks boring. No party logo, no photographs, default font? If you put this on plain paper, I'd assume it was either a joke or an independent with virtually no budget. Hell, even the Green Party put flyers on glossy cardstock in their earliest years. Also, "Before you throw me out hear me out" is the sort of passive-aggressive shit that makes me throw papers out before I read further. Make your headline catchier. "Choose Freedom." There. That one's free. (See what I did there?)
And why have that tiny blurb about charities on the back of the paper in fine print? If you consider this important information, put it on the front. If you don't, don't put it on there. Of course, if you ever decide to do the glossy cardstock half-sheets, you'd be able to change your formatting completely and put that info there.
That's just off the top of my head. There's probably more wrong with it.
LOL calling yourself a Trump supporter and PPC supporter at the same time must be the most hilarious display of self-unawareness I've seen since this whole PPC joke began.
https://globalnews.ca/video/3110859/dont-need-this-karaoke-version-of-donald-trump-maxime-bernier-on-kellie-leitch
Just goes to show the type of people we're dealing with. lol
Meanwhile you do nothing but sit there and bitch. Sure is easier to be the armchair critic hey?