I am the Peoples Party rep from Portage-Lisgar. (Feedback)
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Front and back sides of a flyer I'm planning to distribute to every household. Please provide feedback. Thank you.
Looks boring. No party logo, no photographs, default font? If you put this on plain paper, I'd assume it was either a joke or an independent with virtually no budget. Hell, even the Green Party put flyers on glossy cardstock in their earliest years. Also, "Before you throw me out hear me out" is the sort of passive-aggressive shit that makes me throw papers out before I read further. Make your headline catchier. "Choose Freedom." There. That one's free. (See what I did there?)
And why have that tiny blurb about charities on the back of the paper in fine print? If you consider this important information, put it on the front. If you don't, don't put it on there. Of course, if you ever decide to do the glossy cardstock half-sheets, you'd be able to change your formatting completely and put that info there.
That's just off the top of my head. There's probably more wrong with it.